(Disclaimer 1: I’ve been putting way too many hours into crafting careful pieces of writing and am backing off from that. That means I am writing a blog that sometimes complains about bloggers not writing thoughtfully, while consciously pushing myself to do the same…so it goes.)
(Disclaimer 2: I am uncomfortable (being a novice to all this) offering thoughts and perspective that will automatically link to the comments sections of the blogs I am assessing, so I am not include URLs or exact blog names.)
The assignment started with “Blogging is reading, reflecting, questioning, researching, synthesizing, linking, conversing, teaching, sharing and expressing ideas.” I’m not really seeing that in the blogs I read. It seems much more to be a matter of one person making assertions and then leaving it at that. The writer responded minimally to the subsequent comments, and the majority of the comments seem to come down to saying “me too”.
I started with the blog about brevity in writing. Shelley identified the author as a 14-year old. The style was fairly engaging. The use of strikethrough text baffled me. I’ve seen it in other blogs where it was similar to complaining by speaking under one’s breath loud enough for everyone to hear. That didn’t seem to be the case here.
I found the frequency of links to be irritating. Some seemed gratuitous and broke the flow of the discussion. He could just as well have defined twittories, for example, and not made me disrupt the train of thought by going off to another page.
The tone of the comments was. I suspect they represent teachers speaking supportively to a student. I didn’t really notice that until I reread them with the context of the commentary of the other four blogs I looked for this assignment. The writer responded frequently to comments. It tended to be a point-by-point refutation/explanation/confirmation that I did not find especially enlightening.
(I offer a curious aside on the writer. Looking around the web a little led me to reconstruct the story that this fourteen year-old was presented as an icon of what students can achieve through blogging (being described once as “the poster boy of the Student 2.0 ‘movement’ ”. Just over a year after this blog, though, he posted saying he was giving it up. The post included allusions I found concerning and which suggested he had had some very bad experiences and had a very poor self-image. He linked to a blog arguing that teens don’t have the experience or perspective to be blogging about educational practices. Blogging was apparently not a healthy experience for him. He is probably the exception, but this might nonetheless be a cautionary tale to consider when encouraging students to post.)
I next read the blog from the list by a librarian working to improve student PowerPoint presentations. I was put off by the one and two sentence paragraphs. I was like reading the local Gannet newspaper. Perhaps it is out of vogue, but I like to see ideas be developed and supported, not simply asserted.
I understand and sympathize with the author’s point…I’ve rarely seen the spectrum of tools offered by PowerPoint used effectively to enhance a talk. It was interesting that she advocated banning bullets from PowerPoints, but over 80% of her text was in bullets.
The comments to the blog included an awful lot of “me-too” responses. And the comments were all very brief. They were not epitomizing the ideal we were given of “reflecting, questioning, researching, synthesizing, linking…”
Then I read the Rationale for writing blogs in education. I initially thought I would skip this one seeing how long it was. Then I noticed that she was writing in paragraphs and wanted to test my observations about the choppy writing of the previous blog.
I liked the excerpt from Donald Leu and the observation that changes are happening so fast that we are unable to evaluate them. I think that is at the heart of my concerns about the hype over using these web resources in teaching.
That point brought to mind something I learned in the environmental industry. Whenever you put gas in your car it comes from an underground storage tank. It was initially obvious that those should be made of steel, but a few decades later they are all rusting out. We’ve been replacing the steel tanks with fiberglass ones, secure in our knowledge they will not rust. We won’t know how good a choice this was for a few more decades. If the choice was sound, we are in good shape. It something unforeseen happens then we will face environmental damage at least as great as was cause by the leaking steel tanks.
If all the hype about web 2.0 is sound, we are being insightful and farseeing educators. If something unforeseen happens…
Many of the comments for this blog noted the good list of points. I don’t think any took issue with the claims or the absence of support for the claims. They were pretty much all saying “nice work”, like would be written at the top of a paper when the teacher doesn’t have opportunity to evaluate in detail.
The penultimate blog I read was a summary of what happened in a math class, written by a student for other students. The writer added discussion of the usage of the word “percent” that was taken nearly verbatim without citation from Wikipedia. I found troubling the juxtaposition between that and the blog being listed in the Scribe Post Hall of Fame. I understand that the concept of “restate in your own words” is rough for an eighth grader, bit to give an award a middle school student for something that could get him thrown out of college 5 years later gives me pause.
All the comments were of the “good job” variety, being affirming votes of classmates.
Finally I read a criticism of the digital native/digital immigrant dichotomy. It was written in sustained paragraphs and generated thoughtful and supported arguments. The comments were of a similar character. There was more dissention than in the comments of the other posts, but still a lot of “me-too” or “good post” responses. I wonder: is the goal of those to assure the writer that someone is reading? Are those posted by other bloggers who are sympathetic to wanting comments?
I further wonder: are these comments of similar flavor to the post because people who like this kind of argument are more inclined to read it and post in a similar style? Is there an element of self-fulfilling prophecy going on here?